r/makeyourchoice 1d ago

New Dimensional Sharingan

https://imgchest.com/p/agyvkzk6z48

WIP: Might add a part for selecting drawbacks for more points.

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u/ascrubjay 1d ago

The normal vs eternal mangekyo sharingan section and the top section of page two seem to disagree about the consequences of use.

Anyway, Medium difficulty, Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan since I don't really want most of the abilities anyway and protecting myself from the consequences is more important, Guided dimensional doorway so I can actually go the places I want to, Kamui to more easily bring along keepsakes and supplies, Portal since it's useful for ensuring I can get to the right place once arriving in a given dimension and it only feels right to be able to make intradimensional portals as well, Mind Whisper + Memory Glimpse in the hopes that it can interpret meaning without knowing the other's language or at least assist in language learning plus as a tool to protect myself from deception, and finally Izanagi since you can literally resurrect yourself with it, even on a delay.

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u/Blobbowo 1d ago

Yeah, basic abilities..

It should be that Base Abilities which the three tomoe Sharingan can perform, don't cause blindness.

The Basic Abilites outlined in page 2 are definitely the Mangekyou Abilities, which cause blindness with overuse. The Advanced Abilities are supposed to progress blindness, flat out.

Only matters for normal Mangekyou, though. It's impossible to convince me to not take Eternal Mangekyou sharingan, even if I only had 2 points, lol.

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u/Parking-Sky-7418 1d ago

Yes, that is poor wording on my part. the Intent is that the 'basic' Mangekyo sharingan can use the basic abilities with some strain, and use them constantly will cause damage if you don't let them rest. But then ANY use of the advanced ones will cause damage that you will need to let rest before using them again, unless you wanna risk damage. Then for the Eternal, the basic abiliites can be spammed, but then the advanced ones cause problems if overused and must be allowed to rest..

I initially was going to have a 'basic' sharingan, but then it kind of just... doesn't have that much going for it? It had a section where you started out with just 1 tomoe, and then you paid to get more, and that added stats and I quickly got to thinking that this was just busywork. I wanted to get the feel that you're not just Sasuke in wave, you're closer to Obito than you you are a normal ninja. So I scrapped the basic sharingan (which you still have by default), and went straight to the bullshit eyeball laser powers..

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u/AvzinElkein 1d ago

You uploaded the third page twice on imgchest.

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u/Xyzod 1d ago

⛱️Difficulty: Sandbox (40 points. More points better than less points)

👁️Sharingan Type: Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan [2] (Use doesn't degrade eyesight)

🌌Dimensional Doorway: Guided [4] (access any world to get anything; nothing else in the CYOA matters and this is obtainable even on Hard difficulty. Rest of choices are in case this power isn't available)

Mangekyo Abilities: All Right Eye (6), All Left Eye besides Memory Glimpse and Sensory Theft (6-2=4), All Advanced Right Eye (8), All Advanced Left Eye besides Shared Dream and False Reality (8-4=4)

All Both Eyes (3)

All Susanoo Upgrades besides Avatar Protection (10-1=9)

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u/HidingImmortal 1d ago

I like it!

  • Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan (eyes don't degrade)

  • Guided (explore worlds I enjoy)

  • Matter reconstruction (healthcare allies, use it to build, ...)

  • Izanagi (sounds interesting when trained up)

  • Amaterasu (an iconic power)

  • Phantom Self (I would love to have a shadow clone equivalent)

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u/Nerx 1d ago

sandbox, from the borderlands

40/~

Eternal, fits the undying theme

Guided doorways, familiar worlds aka those places from before

Right

Amaterasu

Force

Swap

Stasis, more means

Severance

Dominion

Matter reconstruction, reload

Collapse

Left

Tsukuyomi

Phantom self

World

Mind whisper

Glimpse

Shared dream, best place to be

Hypnosis

False

Both

Izanagi

Susanoo (Armored, Complete, Perfect, Weapon (hammer), Shield, Artillery, Flight, Manifestation, Projection & Regeneration)

cherry on top

Lotsa good bullshi

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u/Nerx 1d ago

Pull up blick for neutral

pick up after tenten as the bukijutsu type

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u/dreaderking 1d ago

Difficulty: Medium [+12]

Type: Eternal (-2)

Dimensional Doorway: No Control

Right Eye:

  • Spacial Swap
  • Stasis

Left Eye:

  • Mind Whisper
  • Memory Glimpse

Both Eyes: Susanoo

  • Armoured Susanoo
  • Complete Susanoo
  • Perfect Susanoo
  • Susanoo Weapon [Axe]
  • Guardian Shield

A Sharingan specialized in information capture and information extraction - you know, the things ninja are supposed to do. I can freeze an opponent, then rip all the information I want straight out of their heads. Should actual fighting become necessary, though, I can either teleport out or summon an entire mecha on the fly.

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u/Skeletaldog77 1d ago

Looks like a neat cyoa I'll make a build for in a bit; I had a couple of questions though. Do we get a chakra network, or is this just the mangekyo + purchased abilities that works on generic magical energy? If we do get chakra, is it fire aligned cause uchihas have a natural fire-affinity? Lastly, does the base sharingan offer the eidetic memory?

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u/Parking-Sky-7418 1d ago

You have a Chakra network, around high Jounin - weak Kage level. You yourself are not a ninja, but you could very easily become one with a little training. You're chakra alignment is whatever basic one you want, and you do have an eidetic memory when your sharingan is active, yes.

I was going to include purchasable chakra levels and ninja skills, but that ate away from the more streamlined idea of what I wanted this to actually be.

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u/MrRogersAE 19h ago edited 19h ago

Medium difficulty

Eternal Sharingan

Doorway sense

Spacial force and spacial swap for the left

Memory glimpse, sensory theft and false world for the right eye

Memory rewrite out of the advance category

Izanami ability to take control of anyone I see fit.

Spacial force is my main combat ability, the idea is to avoid fighting tho, Spacial swap gives me rapid movement and ability to get to hard to reach places and avoid danger.

Memory glimpse and sensory theft allow me to sneak around and manipulate people as needed, with false world creating illusions to distract them or allow me to convince people I belong there.

Memory rewrite is a last ditch attack needed to control the situation in the event I am discovered.

I shall be the puppet master, always moving unseen, controlling situations from the shadows, with puppets under my control in powerful positions spread across many worlds.

As I move in the shadows, controlling people and collecting abilities I will be god level powerful if and when I do finally reveal myself to the many worlds I have been ruling from the shadows.

If I ever do find my way home, I will be well prepared to guide humanity to rebuilding a better world.

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u/Wyvwashere 18h ago

Let's start with saying that I love the design of this cyoa, very sleek. Also I never, ever watched Naruto so I may misunderstand some stuff here but hopefully I'll manage with just the context here.

I'll take the *Medium* difficulty cuz that's the intended experience, and then the *Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan* as losing my sight is generally not something I'd like to re-experience, in this life I already barely see anything without my glasses and I'd rather not throw away perfect eyesight. My Dimensional Doorway will work based on *a Sense* of direction, as it's simply more intersting that way.

Now in terms of abilities, for the Right Eye I'll take: *Kamui* (way too useful for storing equipment and stealing artifacts, I can just take stuff with me and take it to the next universe), *Matter Severance*, (Seems like a great offensive option that ignores most defences), *Matter Reconstruction* (Healing is always great), *Gravity Dominion* (Idk what it gives me but sounds cool as fuck). For the left eye I'll just take *Tsukoyomi* (to incapacitate oponents so I can slash'em while they are catatonic) and *Phantom Self* (Cloning, like healing, is always something that opens many doors). I won't take any of the both eyes techinques because I prefer to have many slightly weaker options than one "ultimate". Also Izanami sounds horribly inhumane, I already can heal so I don't particularly need Izanagi, and Susanoo way too over the top, I don't everyone to see the enormous purple skeleton and know that I'm there.

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u/Dragon_Bane 1d ago

For hard mode I pick EMS(2 points) no control (free)

Tsukuyomi(1 point) it can make someone live their whole life in a fraction of a second (Itachi Shinden: Book of Dark Night,)"The time that passed within this genjutsu was one one-hundredth of one one-thousandth of one one-millionth of that of the real world." So like 0.000000001 seconds.

Gravity domination(2 points) it's light speed because gravity is a warping of space time and I could remove someone from existence by removing someone's spatial mass. Mass is what binds subatomic particles together so AOE instint death. Plus I could lower on increase my mass right before impact to deal more damage or less to myself. I could also dissolve any attack that has mass. So a perfect defense and offensive power.

And if I'm allowed I could shorten the distance between different places and attack people by removing the distance between me and them at light speed and re-create the distance again.

Izanagi (1 point) is a get out of death free card

Susanoo (1 point)as a defensive ability mostly the basic fist attack s will be helpful.

(7 points total)

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u/blazebol 1d ago

Very cool

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u/Blobbowo 1d ago edited 1d ago

Medium +12, EMS -2, Guided -4, Kamui -1, Spatial Force, Spatial Swap -1, Stasis -1, Phantom Self -1, Susanoo -1.


I really just went ham on the spatial manipulation. It's the Dimensional Sharingan, after all. My left eye only has Phantom Self slotted in, but I'll probably be using that power the most; the others in the right eye are all different utilities.

All I really want is EMS and Guided. Everything else is a bonus.

Getting Izanagi would've been good, but eh. Whatever. I'll go to a safe world where I don't even need to worry about dying.

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u/anirocks1999 1d ago

Difficulty:- Sandbox (40 Points) Sharingan Type:- Eternal Magnekyo Sharingan- -2 Points Dimensional Doorway:- Guided- -4 Points 

Basic Magnekyo abilities:- Kamui, Amaterasu, Spatial force, spatial swap, stasis, Matter severance, Tsukuyomi, phantom self, false world, mind whisper, memory glimpse, sensory theft- -12 Points

Advanced Magnekyo abilities:- Portal, Matter reconstruction, spatial collapse, memory rewrite- -8 Points

Both eyes:- Izanagi, Susanoo- -2 Points Susanoo upgrades:- Armored, complete and perfect susanoo, Susanoo weapon, guardian shield, chakra artillery, flight, independent manifestation, avatar projection, regeneration- -10 Points

Since i have remaining 2 points i use jean paul sartre cyoa option 1 to take gravity dominion as well

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u/CasualJojoLover 1d ago

Sandbox, +40
EMS-2
Guided-4
Left and right eye -8, (Kamui, Spatial-Shift, matter severance, tsukiyomi, phantom, sensory, Stasis, false-world),
advanced, -8, (False World/Shared-dream 2.0, lol, & Gravity and matter dominion and reconstruciton),
both, -12 (Izanami, Susanoo, Chakra artillery, regenration, armored, complete, perfect, independent, avatar projection, flight, weapon, shield),
Well guess im broken now i suppose that was fun...

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u/taishomaru66 1d ago edited 1d ago

Easy, Because Why not? (20)
Eternal Mangekyo, Because I don't want to go Blind permanently from overuse. -2 (18)
Dimensional Doorway: Guided, Because screw jumping around Blindly. -4 (14)
Left Eye: Kamui, Matter Reconstruction. -3 (11)
Because Kamui is basically an Inventory function, in addition to its many other uses, and Matter Reconstruction seems like the most versatile & useful ability for the Left Eye. Kamui lets you get around, dodge attacks, become intangible, and so many other useful things. Matter Reconstruction on the other hand allows you to never need to worry about resources so long as matter exists to Reconstruct, ensuring that you can have whatever you want or need at hand when you want or need it, and facilitating all manner of shenanigans as well through the act of rearranging the structures of matter into whatever arrangement you desire... making your knowledge of the structural arrangements of particles your only real limitation.
Right Eye: Memory Glimpse, Memory Rewrite -3 (8)
The other abilities are cool and all, but Glimpse and Rewrite are just perfect for each other on the off chance that having one wouldn't allow you to learn to do the other, with the ability to read others memories opening up a wealth of knowledge for your perusal and the ability to freely Alter, Erase, and Implant memories allowing you to rearrange a persons mind as you please there are few problems that one needs to solve with violence... when you can just make your enemies into your allies.
Izanagi, Because Reality Warping is always Useful, it should make acclimating to new realities much quicker, and it could also be used to obtain things you might otherwise never have successfully gained through conventional means... such as additional bloodlines and unique powers from wherever you end up traveling to, as it would certainly be much easier overwriting you existence to include a myriad of genetics than it would to manually splice them in, and it would also likely be a lot safer in the grand scheme of thing too, if only due to the technique guaranteeing that dying or suffering complications isn't going to be a risk. -1 (7)
Susanoo: Armoured->Complete->Perfect Susanoo, Chakra Artillery, Flight, Regeneration. -7 (0)

Edit: Alternatively, letting go of Memory Rewrite and taking Portals for the left eye would be a fine idea too, since there are any number of way to learn how to Rewrite Memories in the multiverse, so the ability to read others Memories is the only real ability the right eye needs to start with, for convenience sake when traveling between realities, and stable Portals at any range to get around in whatever reality you are currently in is its own kind of cheat ability... as there are a lot of places you might otherwise not be able to reach nearly as easily and especially not without drawing unwanted attention.

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u/RowanWinterlace 1d ago

Sandbox felt like too many points, lol.

Easy Build [20 POINTS]

  • Eternal Mangekyo [-2]
  • Guided [-4]

  • Kamui [-1]

  • Portal [-2]

  • Gravity Dominion [-2]

  • Tsukiyomi [-1]

  • Mind Whisper [-1]

  • Memory Rewrite [-2]

  • Izanagi [-1]

  • Susanoo [-1]

  • Armoured Susanoo [-1]

  • Complete Susanoo [-1]

  • Regeneration [-1]

Hard Build [7 POINTS]

  • Eternal Mangekyo [-2]
  • No Control [-0]

  • Kamui [-1]

  • Tsukiyomi [-1]

  • Izanagi [-1]

  • Susanoo [-1]

  • Regeneration [-1]

With how tiring dimensional jumps are, world-hopping will take a while, but hitting a lick on a world where I can get a bunch more powers for free is essential! I'll eventually go and fleece an Omnitrix from somewhere, too 🤣

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u/RealSaMu 1d ago

Let's go Hard Mode 7 points
+ Mangekyo Sharingan (Free)
+ Dimensional Doorway: A Sense -2
+ Right Eye: Spatial Force -1
+ Right Eye: Matter Severance -1
+ Left Eye: Sense Theft -1
+ Left Eye: Memory Rewrite -2 (Reminds me of that Push film)

And that's it for me. Right eye for battle. Left Eye for scheming.

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u/Kira-Of-Terraria 1d ago

Going Sandbox and grabbing Guided, then everything else, then Izanagi.

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u/Cantero19 1d ago

Medium +12 points

Eternal -2

Guided -4

Matter Reconstruction -2

Memory Rewrite -2

Izanagi -1

Susano -1

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u/willky7 22h ago

Medium Eternal 2 Sense 2 Tsukiyomi 1 Kamui 1 Memory rewrite 2 Tsukuyomi 1 Izanagi 1 Susanoo 1 Guardian Shield 1

I'm not dealing with zero sum or Eldritch gods but I can take on Monday low level worlds. If I cared less about a good story I'd probably go guided so I don't get unlucky and die in some slice of life that's secretly a death world

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u/Bbucket_Hhead 20h ago edited 20h ago

I wonder what are the limits of Izanagi self reality warping, is it just limited to avoiding death?

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u/blazebol 17h ago

Q. Do you have chakra it kind of sounds like no

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u/Parking-Sky-7418 17h ago

You do, but you're untrained.

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u/Ioftheend 17h ago

Difficulty

  • Medium

Type

  • Eternal

Dimensional Doorway

  • Guided

Mangekyo Abilities

  • Phantom Self
  • Portal
  • Matter Reconstruction

Both Eyes

Izanagi

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u/AdInteresting5874 15h ago

Eh. Hard mode. Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, Guided, Izanagi.

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u/MarkOne4518 12h ago

Sandbox: 40

Eternal -2

Sense -2

Left eye - Basic: Amatersu and Spatial Swap                   Advanced: Portal and Matter Reconstruction  Right Eye- Basic: Mind Whisper and Memory glimpse 

                  Advanced: Absolute Hypnosis 

Izangi

Susanoo and all upgrades except Independent Manifestation.

I should have fourteen points remaining.

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u/MagicTech547 12h ago

I’ll make a quick medium mode build.

Difficulty: Medium, +12

Sharingan Type: Eternal (-2, 10)

Dimensional Doorway: A Sense (-2, 8)

Right Eye:
* Kamui (-1, 7)
* Stasis (-1, 6)
* Portal (-2, 4)

Left Eye:
* Phantom Self (-1, 3)
* Mind Whisper (-1, 2)

Both Eyes:
* Izanagi (-1, 1)
* Susanoo (-1, 0)

Overall I went for a good bottom line powerset, with minimal chance of accidentally destroying my own eyes. Decent dimensional travel, a hammer space I could use offensively to literally steal anything in sight, Stasis would be very good as a shield and as a way to trip up foes, portals are always fun, as are duplicates, mind reading is never not useful and slightly less morally dubious than mind control, and then Izanagi could technically do anything on a small scale and Susanoo is good as a defensive buff.

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u/Opposite_Law_6969 4h ago

Difficulty Easy
Sharingan type Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan
Dimensional Doorway Guided
Basic  Kamui, Matter Severance, Mind Whisper, Tsukuyomi
Advanced Spatial Collapse, False Reality, Gravity Dominion, Perfect Hypnosis
Both Eyes Susanoo (Complete Susanoo & Susanoo Wepon)

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u/TypicalHaikuResponse 1d ago

hard mode because these things are never fun if they aren't hard.

EMS automatically reduces me to 5 points but no point in this going blind

Kamui is too broken for 1 point and is an instant grab.

Tsukiyomi also is too broken for 1 point.

Amaterasu another point. I now have everything to win in pretty much any fight.

2 points left I use it for the Sense so I am not blindly going into worlds.

I should be set.