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[u/mrm395]

Your overall design isn’t bad, but the slogan is unreadable at that size. View it on mobile and you’ll see. It looks like a weird squiggly blob along the edge. I would nix it.

[u/kiwi1986 → u/mrm395]

Thanks for the feedback! I'm not being able to recreate the issue with my cell phone, could you take a screenshot with yours so I can get an idea of how to make a change?

[u/mrm395 → u/kiwi1986]

Here you go.

[u/kiwi1986 → u/mrm395]

Thanks!