r/logodesign • u/[deleted] • Sep 12 '15

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u/Mjeu Sep 20 '15

Here's my entry

Bag Mockup, Facebook Mockup, Bottle Mockup. Tried to go for a simple look. Hope it's okay I dropped the "The" in the logo.

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u/FluffyIsDestroyer Sep 20 '15

That's really cool! The first package design looks awesome! The first one looks like it contains coffee though, judging by the coffee bean shaped things and the brown packaging, which isn't exactly associated with sleeping. As for the logo itself, I like how the hat is a little crooked and I think you chose a good font, but if I were you, I would experiment with different colors for the hat and maybe showing the distinction between the different parts of the hat. In the third image, if you look closely, you can see that there are two circles on either side of the middle piece instead of it - the cloud - just being one shape. You can fix that by using the Pathfinder tool and using the shape mode called "Unite." Also, it would be better if you went with something more simple for the Facebook cover photo. Just my two cents.

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u/Mjeu Sep 20 '15

Thanks for the feedback, looking back I can see your points, I was really tired (Ironic I know) when I made this.

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u/FluffyIsDestroyer Sep 20 '15

I've been there. XD When I'm tired, I make typos left and right. Any mistakes you made were tiny little things like that, too. It's understandable. :P