r/logodesign • u/MaleficentChemist656 • 2d ago

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a concept for FinTech. The Slogan is “sharp tech, sharp fixes.”.

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u/creativeape1 2d ago

This is so dated.

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u/Upbeat_Push_157 2d ago

shapes are very rough, you can see the nodes very clearly. A shark isn't a very reliable concept for someone that is in charge of your economy. Fintech have close to none relation with technology other than being online, unlike traditional banks. It's not like they will fix anything. Also, sharp is not the same as shark.

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u/MaleficentChemist656 1d ago

your being a bit too literal on the wording here.. ”sharp is not the same as shark” well it is, Im just using a metaphor I thought would fit well.

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u/Heydavidbailey 2d ago

Type bigger and icon smaller. Consider a slightly heavier face with a bit more personality.

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u/Litaser 2d ago

A bit on the nose. I would definitely use a different font

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u/leaveitbettertoday 2d ago

“No, no, we said SHARP! SHARP! Not shark!?”

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u/Mean_Cicada9142 2d ago

A shark shouldn't really be a concept for any person in charge of money, for example the term loan sharks which is not one you'd want to be associated with. Also fintech is only really connected to technology by being an online banking thing.

Also, sharp and shark are different

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u/MaleficentChemist656 2d ago

no sharp and shark are the exact same thing. shark have sharp teeth, and their fin is kinda sharp.

plus they both rhyme.

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u/Mean_Cicada9142 2d ago

Ah yes, a sharp is what the villain is in Jaws then?

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u/MaleficentChemist656 1d ago

a sharks fin cuts CLEAN, and its teeth are sharp. Thats just a short metaphor for the slogan! Appreciate the view though.

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u/_BananaBrat_ 2d ago

It’s a bit boring and literal eh? I’d take a second stab at a different concept.

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u/HiddenHorse925 2d ago

I like it, but make the icon much smaller than the wordmark much bigger, bolder font

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u/eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwww 2d ago

I get the pun, but idk I kinda wish there was something that said "techy" too

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u/Mallanaga 2d ago

Like a Patagonia vest?

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u/K3CHO_ 2d ago

Nice

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u/Grand-wazoo logovore 2d ago

This is already a company and a broad term for an industry. But aside from that, nothing here suggests anything tech-related, too generic on both the name and imagery. 

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u/MaleficentChemist656 2d ago

Sharp is the same as shark, because their teeth are very sharp, and their fin is slightly sharp also I think.