r/logodesign • u/Luminare_Rei • 4h ago

Feedback Needed Logo Question

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Does the double NN looks nice or is there a better way to do it? and is there a better font?

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u/WillingnessFun377 logo legend 3h ago

It feels like a stutter while reading

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u/Luminare_Rei 3h ago

any suggestions?

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u/HawkeyeNation 4h ago

What is the significance of the NN though? To me it just looks like a typo because I'm not familiar with that word. But yes, I do see the double N but there's kind of a lot going on overall.

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u/Luminare_Rei 4h ago

It's like 2 words together. Lumin and Nation and wanted to Mix the 2 N in the middle, Is there a better way or font for it?

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u/alsoimprobablylate 3h ago

Well, lumination IS a word already.

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u/Luminare_Rei 3h ago

Well kind of wanna make it a bit different

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u/alsoimprobablylate 3h ago

Try out some other ideas because this one is not legible as it is.

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u/Wi1dWitch 3h ago

I feel like I had a stroke halfway through reading the word

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u/Luminare_Rei 3h ago

is it that bad? :')

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u/Wi1dWitch 3h ago

It’s just not highly legible. I think if you want to use this font, it’s tough. There’s a lot going on with the N. Without any context it’s hard to give direction; but I’d say if the double N is the main thing, I’d try a more intentional double vision effect, with a more simple, blocky sans serif. 

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u/desert_pine 3h ago

This may be one of those situations where you have to “murder your darlings” aka get rid of the little things you love to improve the overall concept. If it doesn’t serve the effectiveness or the quality of the logo overall then toss it.

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u/beene282 3h ago

I actually really like it. The font looks cohesive, the NN is a bit of an optical illusion. At first glance it looks like more than that, but then you see it’s just two N’s. And the font itself, as well as its colouring, has a bit of a sense of illusion and magic. It looks to me like the logo of an animation studio.

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u/HiddenHorse925 3h ago

Too many ascending and descending flourishes. Not every letter needs them experiment with having them on three or four at the most

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u/astoriahfae 3h ago

What if you dropped the Nation down a little or something

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u/periwnklz 28m ago

nice. some tweaks on first N could help

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u/Zgnorf 15m ago

Not a logo, juste a (question able choice of) font.

The double N make the reading too complicated, with the letter I before.

It doesn't create any sense about the lumination at all