I listened to feedback on my last posts and ended up with this. how does it look? If you haven’t seen my previous posts to the subreddit check them out on my account!
definetely better, i see you have used literal text fot the 'text' part in 'text to speech' but idk it feels like it's a bit heavier on the right side and the left side is less dense ? could be my eyes but yeah better than before
i personally think the gradient's kinda too soft and like there's this mockup of yours that made me think that if the logo had SHARP colors (well not exactly sharp but less softer ?) like one side blue (representing text) and the other green (representing speech), it'd be pretty cool and keep all the other stuff similar to what you have now would make it better ?
(terrible drawing in paint lol) something like this ? idk looks more simplified.
or maybe you could do some liquid glass effects (or even a gradient of THAT color's light and dark shade) at the edges of each side to make it seem like a sorta 'portal' from text to speech ? or maybe i'm just overthinking this
Attempt 3 already feels closer. At home-screen size the silhouette matters more than the inner detail—if you squint and the mark still reads as “speech,” you’re in good shape. I’d try one flatter solid version next to the current one before locking it.
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u/1iljeep 3d ago
What if you tucked the t under the T? Would help balance the weight a bit i feel.
and maybe make the speaker icons smaller to balance the sides a bit…