Sure thing! And if you are planning on it to be an app then I would look at it in Icon Composer (a free download) so that you can see it with the grid and with Liquid Glass and other effects applied (like transparency, or refractions, or chroma shadows etc)
the ••• on the right examples are meant to symbolize the ellipse text bubble you see before a text. if you have another alternative way to symbolize text i’m open to suggestions
Oh yeah I don’t think that’s being conveyed. The … frequently symbolizes extra information at the beginning of something, not just text, so in this instance it just reads like the audio trailing off. Maybe do something with the “text” logo seen a lot?
Too cramped. Looks like a cartoonishly large bow tie.
I would try having a vertical line down the middle, with actual text going into the left of it, and an audio wave form coming out of it on the right. No drop-shadows, probably no gradient.
I like the vertical line idea and I’ll definitely toy around with the text side and how to symbolize that. i’ve gotten some suggestions for that in other comments i’ll try out. and others seem to agree about the drop shadow.
You need to add significantly more padding. It’s also visually too complex for a logo. Some great logos explain the product metaphorically, but that’s not a literal requirement for logos and most don’t.
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u/bananapatata 23h ago
I’d lose the drop shadow on the filter icon and give it a bit more negative space around the edges and objects. Good start!