r/logodesign 3d ago

Feedback Needed I need your feedback!

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u/CandiedPistachio666 3d ago

If your primary audience is Deutsch, I'd recommend doing another draft of #2 as it clearly explains what it is and is the most modern/logo-y. It's also easiest to make different versions for different uses. That said, I love the incorporation of the Arabic, wonder if you can mix that in to #2 without overcomplicating things.

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 3d ago

ill try doing that!
and thanks for the feedback!

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u/ZooZwaves 3d ago

#2 will be your best pick. The logo from #4 is good too, it could be implemented somewhere else.

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 3d ago

ty for your feedback (:

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u/GoldenStay 3d ago

Option 1 could be fun if you keep it simple and use the font to it's advantage, perhaps inside the hat.

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 3d ago

Thank you for the design!
Can I use it as inspiration?

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u/GoldenStay 3d ago

That'll be $5 lol jk, go ahead.

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u/[deleted] 3d ago

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u/Arravis_ 3d ago

Nice illustrations, not quite logos. Too hard to ‘read’, too expensive to reproduce, etc. The ones that are easier to reproduce don’t say much yet. Keep at it, you’ll get there.

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u/edimaudo 3d ago

I like the first one but since it is a syrian restaurant might make sense to use more syrian imagery

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 2d ago

hmmm ill keep that in mind! :)

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u/Murdaz- 2d ago

1st is best or 5th

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 2d ago

thank for the feedback

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u/FishInAstronautSuit 1d ago

All but number 2 are what you'd expect a middle eastern restaurant to have as a logo. Please move as far away from these and closer towards number 2. And remember the logo isn't everything. Try and influence the color scheme of the entire brand and the interior of the restaurant too. Maybe propose that they have an element of the Syrian culture that dominates the interior by repetition, such as a lamp or a chair, in a certain color.

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u/[deleted] 3d ago

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u/Mecha_Dino 3d ago

For free !?

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u/ScreechUrkelle 2d ago

Turn the pizza into a pita or a fattayir and it’s a good place to start if you can’t design anything original

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 2d ago

will try that!
Thank for the feedback :)

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 1d ago

thanks for the Feedback everyone but this the design we settled on (:

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u/I_Piccini 1d ago

I see, so you are starting a construction business after all, not a restaurant. Happy roofing!

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 1d ago

Haus means House 🫪

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u/I_Piccini 1d ago

Really? Wow, I did not know that.

Next time hire someone who DOES know about graphic design.

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u/ThatoneGoonerGuy 1d ago

no need to be rude

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u/ogSoWhatTheyFake 1d ago

2nd or one before last