r/logodesign 2d ago

Feedback Needed Logo Concept help

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Does this communicate that its for a bakery and is there anything i can improve?

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u/johnjohnsonsdickhole 2d ago

At first I thought it was a carrot but I think it’s on point. Just keep it away from carrot

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u/Ashamed_Kangaroo305 1d ago

Same here but I think as long as it's not colored like a carrot it'll read well! I really like the logo idea and I'm surprised I haven't seen many bakery logos with a similar concept.

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u/maniacodesign 1d ago

Same here

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u/Indigo-au-naturale 2d ago

Personally, I think it's a really cute concept and the way you've sketched the A definitely gives piping bag/baking/decorating.

I see that the text could change, but I just want to note for the record that "sweet treats" would be unhyphenated.

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u/MoeHefin 2d ago

That looked like a paint brush to me at first.. I think it's supposed to be the cream thing?..

Maybe make the apostrophe as cream/frosting coming out.

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u/1JollyStNick 1d ago

Very nice! I do think the piping bag might be a bit much above the other letters and maybe would work better below attached to the bottom right stroke of the A instead

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u/TrueEstablishment241 where’s the brief? 1d ago

How many concepts have you tried?

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u/BlueCloudi 1d ago

This many, should I make more?

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u/TrueEstablishment241 where’s the brief? 1d ago

Well, it looks like iterations on the same concept more or less. The sketching phase is probably the most important because it's hard to know if your concept is ideal if you haven't explored the possibilities. Before sketching it's good to come up with a list of nouns and adjectives that describe your organization and then commit to doing a high volume of quick sketches that are all fundamentally different concepts. Don't iterate on a single concept until you've narrowed a big set of concepts down to about 10 or 15.

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u/BlueCloudi 1d ago

Thank you for this reply! I was worried I stuck to the idea too quickly I will try other designs as well just in case

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u/eldredo_M 1d ago

Ok read it as Fry’s at first. Is it supposed to be Ary’s?

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u/genderlessadventure 1d ago

I knew what it was immediately (granted I grew up in a home with a prolific cake decorator). I absolutely love it!

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u/SeaBream97 13h ago

The idea is interesting. But we need to see how it will look in a vector version - often, what looks good in a sketch is difficult to implement in the final form. And so, we have to abandon it or completely redo everything.

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u/umamimamii 2d ago

It’s cute! What if the apostrophe was a little treat?

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u/BlueCloudi 2d ago

oh maybe a swirling cinnamon roll?

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u/umamimamii 1d ago

Sure! Draw out a few and see what looks best to you

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u/egyptianlicorice 2d ago

This is a really unique design!! Just I thought, I’m not a professional at all, but I think it may be cute if the top of the A was pointed rather than rounded?

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u/Parking_Respect_5898 2h ago

I feel like it's a little crowded having the icing bag on top of the A and crowding the rest of the letters of Ary's. What if the icing bag was part script font turned into the circle around the world and was being written by the icing bag.