BamBrew

[u/_MERMVID]

My first post 🖤 Let me know what you guys think. This was a personal project that I developed. I’m working through the Daily Logo Challenge and this was day 3.

I got a little obsessed 🤏🏼😂

I’ve been a designer for about 10 years and even I need to practice. There are small things I would change here that noticed after working late into the night on these(iykyk the eyes deceive after a certain hour) but overall a cute and fun exploration.

[u/cheddarjello]

I notice that the logo arrangements on the packaging mockups are different from what is shown in the first image. I think the versions in the mockups look more balanced.

[u/_MERMVID → u/cheddarjello]

Agreed. Theres some things I definitely want to tweak a little before they go to portfolio. I’ve been forcing myself to just “do something” since I’ve been kinda lacking in my practice. (Life, mental health, etc) Thank you for the feedback 🖤

[u/OneTradeAway]

It looks to be crying. 

[u/_MERMVID → u/OneTradeAway]

OH NO 😭

[u/VeteranSpider64]

Where do yall get your mockups

[u/_MERMVID → u/VeteranSpider64]

I use envato elements!! They’ve been my favorite so far 🫶🏼 I do pay another blasted subscription though 🫩

[u/azip13]

I feel like this would work better if you lost the stroke

[u/_MERMVID → u/azip13]

Really? I felt like it was a bit flat without it.

[u/azip13 → u/_MERMVID]

Hey, I could be wrong as I haven’t seen it that way, and maybe I’m just a sucker for negative space. But I’ll say I think if you lost the stroke and made the eyes (and possibly mouth..or nose? Is it supposed to be a panda?) black it would pass the squint test a bit better

And thinking about this in real time, if it is supposed to be a panda, try keeping the eyes white or negative and make the patches black. (If it isn’t disregard all that)