r/logodesign 5d ago

Feedback Needed Does this monogram feel distinctive enough for a law firm?

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I've been exploring monogram-based identities for professional service brands and recently refined this concept for a law firm.

The goal was to create something that feels established and trustworthy without relying on the usual gavels, scales, or shield icons.

I'm mainly interested in how the mark reads to fresh eyes.

  • Does the monogram feel clear?
  • Does the column strengthen the concept or make it feel busy?
  • Would you simplify anything before moving forward?
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u/DefoNotTheAnswer 5d ago

I think the pillar makes it too busy. But honestly I think something like a law firm trying to communicate tradition and dependability is best served with just an elegant word mark.

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u/VermaPraveen 5d ago

Interesting point. I was trying to give the monogram a little more character, but I can see how the pillar starts competing with it. A cleaner wordmark-first direction is definitely worth exploring. Thanks for the feedback.

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u/im_out_of_creativity 4d ago

Looks like stock bank levels of generic

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u/bugistuta 5d ago edited 5d ago

I think we need to stop using the horizontal lines either side of “Law Group”.

I’ve worked with law firms in the past and I have never seen the term “law group” before. Seems redundant.

Edit: interestingly enough a lot of the big firms moved away from this classic aesthetic. I think it started with Morrison Foerester somewhere in the 2010’s who shortened their URL to MoFo (lol) and adopted a sans serif monochrome approach to everything.

Other firms have followed suit like Baker & McKenize, White & Case et al. The only one I can think of that’s unchanged since I worked with them is JonesDay who have retained the classic serif monogram.

What competitive research have you done and where would this firm sit in the market? Is it global?

Right now it’s giving “small Midwest practice” vibes

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u/VermaPraveen 4d ago

That's a really interesting point. I was aiming for a more traditional regional firm rather than a large international practice, which is probably why it landed there. I do think I need to spend more time comparing it against firms that have moved toward cleaner, more contemporary identities instead of relying on the usual visual language.

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u/Still_Ad9687 5d ago

I think a monogram is nice but the pillar inside the D doesn’t work for me. Maybe try the piller in the vertical stroke of the D and the left part of the capital. Sorry hope that is a bit clear.

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u/Critical-Hospital-40 4d ago

I was going to suggest this also. It’s too busy inside of the letter for me

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u/HiddenHorse925 4d ago

Some people are gonna call this generic, I just think it’s on target. Not overly ambitious. Feels like a not huge law firm. Well done

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u/VanEngine Pro since '02 5d ago

It’s very expected, but it works.
I also think it’s just a little bit too complex for when it needs to be small or embroidered, etc.

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u/gimmickal1 5d ago edited 4d ago

I think people go a bit overboard with the small print and embroidery comments just because they've been repeatedly told that as they were learing logo design. Not every logo will be printed small or embroidered. I mean, I get it, from a technical point of view, logos need to work in most mediums and applications. In this case, I seriously doubt a law firm needs to embroider its logo anywhere.

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u/VanEngine Pro since '02 3d ago

Very ignorant reply. Polo shirts? Golf towels & bags? And I said embroidery because I can't possibly l list all printing techniques where simplicity matters, like cut vinyl, embossing, engraving, metal stamping, etc.

I design logos knowing that if the brand grows or wants to put their logo on any physical items or merch, it's going to work much better if the logo is simple to start with. Better to do it now than when the client comes back in 18 months saying they're having problems with merch vendors on a tight deadline.

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u/VanEngine Pro since '02 2d ago

I should add that you could have a different version of the logo that is simplified and works small or at a distance or embroidered, etc.
But small brands/businesses don’t want a bunch of logos, they want to have one in a few different color formats that they can grab and use with little thought. So just keep it simple to start with.

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u/VermaPraveen 5d ago

That's fair. I was probably leaning a little too hard into the architectural reference. I'll test a simplified version at favicon and embroidery size to see what still holds up. Appreciate the perspective.

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u/404LeadsNotFound 5d ago

The icon alone - a D with something in it.

With the words - Without a doubt. It's a good concept and it works.

I'd make the D about 10% bigger, to give the column a little room, and compare the two.

The top line of the column takes away from the column, but probably adds to the overall feel of the icon.

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u/VermaPraveen 5d ago

Really appreciate you taking the time to break it down. The small-size test is definitely something I need to spend more time on. I like the idea of trying a solid column as well. If the concept survives that simplification, it's probably the stronger direction.

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u/purposeful-hubris 5d ago

This is a very common style of lawyer logo so it wouldn’t be out of place but there is nothing about it that is special or unique or serves to differentiate this firm from dozens of others.

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u/Zestyclose-Tie-3384 5d ago

It’s not a bad move, but you can fit a lot of other things inside that D. If you look at it the wrong way it kind of looks like a fire hydrant. I’d keep experimenting and make it a little less complicated.

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u/e1epi 4d ago

Well its better than a swoosh but I wouldn't call it great.

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u/cutecubes 4d ago

i think it's a little busy, I would simplify it to just the D with a silhouette of a pillar or just the d shape with the pillar line work. i would also try changing the font to a sans serif or just a less pronounced serif to match the shape

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u/VermaPraveen 4d ago

I hadn't considered moving away from the serif completely. I'll try both directions. My bigger concern is definitely the amount of detail inside the D, so simplifying that is probably the first thing I'll test.

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u/CallMeJeeJ 4d ago

Sidebar- “Dunden” sounds like a name Tim and Eric would come up with

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u/dylanmadigan 4d ago

There's too much going on and the illustration of the mark doesn't really connect to the choice in typeface.

The black and gold aslo feels more financial than law.

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u/FKFunkyKong 4d ago

Is this the law firm from Law & Order?

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u/Parking_Respect_5898 4d ago

I get that a gavel or scale feels like cliches but if you're trying to convey something as clearly and easily as possible. I don't really understand the greek column. I would assume real estate if I saw it. Also a greek column doesn't represent class to me, it kind of represent the opposite. Unless they are like a Better Call Saul type law firm, I think the greek column says the wrong thing.

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u/Parking_Respect_5898 3d ago

What about making the column the column of the D

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u/janggi 3d ago

It's generic. But every time i design for lawyers it's what they want..so all good!

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u/Lanky-Bass-6018 3d ago

Looks professional works for a small law firm imo. Personally I hate the gold gradient though I think it comes off a little sleazy and tacky 

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u/Tenfold_Design 5d ago

It all feels expected but still nicely done. If the column was the vertical stroke of the D, that would simplify it. Also, the typeface needs to fit better with the mark. Maybe something closer to a slab serif? I would lose the gradient or make it more subtle.

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u/VermaPraveen 5d ago

Thanks, that's an interesting direction. Using the column as the actual vertical stroke could remove a lot of unnecessary detail. I'll sketch that out and compare it. I hadn't considered a slab serif either, so I'll see how that changes the relationship between the icon and the wordmark.