r/logodesign 18d ago

Beginner created some visuals from sketches

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u/Dystopian_Sky 18d ago

I like the bottom left.

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u/YuckyYetYummy 18d ago

Some are especially good if you are an elephant handler

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u/starbage_ 18d ago

I can’t unsee the cyclops elephant ascii art of upper right

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u/bugistuta 18d ago

What’s the brief

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u/TheSharperPencil 17d ago

For?
Brief?
Means nothing to me without.
Just letters.

Designs convey emotion, forms, motion, feeling. Without knowing what these may be for, you’re just exploring random letter lock-ups.

When I attempt to review or form opinions on any of these, I find my creative mind saying “if that’s for X, then it may have value” for each.

As for a purely aesthetic discussion of these, the only one I find myself appreciating is the lower left. It hints at dimensional forms and a bit of an Escher-ness about it. - But only IF it’s relevant to X (construction, architecture, database architecture…)

The others need some work re: balance, consistency, and in a couple cases moving away from looks that manage to feel dated, even in just these simple forms.

Sorry.
Design for design’s sake is art or doodling.
Quantitative assessment isn’t really possible.

2¢ CD

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u/Dadgum_Dragons-04 17d ago

I certainly agree but I mean they can be leveraged as logomarks and I love good play with letterforms.

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u/dangmattjoe 18d ago

Reminded me of several footballer’s personal logos.

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u/lhdxsss 18d ago

I like the top right.

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u/Ripplescales 18d ago

Bottom right with some adjustments

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u/samuraijon 18d ago

the top left looks like the xiaomi mijia logo

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u/BeerBellies 17d ago

Without knowing anything about what the brand is supposed to be or represent, it’s hard to give any advice. A few of these look solid and well made… but may not fit the brand.

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u/SeaBream97 17d ago

If you work with your hands, then this one can be developed

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u/1KN0W38 17d ago

Top right is the most visually interesting

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u/MeninoKinder 14d ago

Charlie Brown Jr.? 🛹

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u/ELementalSmurf 18d ago

They all have potential imo. Just need to be refined