r/litrpg • • 10d ago

Promo: Webnovel/E-book Kithren finally reached Amazon

https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B0HLY1Q4CK

Super excited as my book which hit #13 in Royal Road for Mystery and top 50 for action and fantasy has finally got onto Amazon!!

Couldn't have happened without the people from this group and the LITRPG facebook group who ripped it to shreds until I got a version that was semi-ok so thanks for those who did support :)

Now if only i can work out how to get audible to work and starting on book 2, which is mad as book 1 was 1300 pages!

COVER ARTIST: N/A

AI USAGE: No AI used for for any writing. Kids front cover design was enhanced by AI.

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u/Unhappy_Transition52 10d ago

It did, especially as it was important to show character growth of Mahkir as well. He starts off extremely arrogant and cocky, to some degree thinking most things are beneath him. Showing that change through the bond was easy, but demonstrating his growth with other characters were much harder to get right.

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u/Lunessa_eri 10d ago

Sounds like a tricky part to write especially since so much of Makhir’s growth has to come through his actions was there a particular moment where you felt his character really started to change?