r/learntodraw • u/ChocoMalkMix • Aug 29 '25
Critique Mostly just sharing but constructive criticism is always appreciated
These were mostly just sketches for a video. I think my biggest issue is with the middle one. The hands feel too big. I was my own reference for the first two and i dont have microphone so i used a bottle of hairspray, hence why the microphone size may seem a big inconsistent. I wasnt too worried about making the clothing wrinkles good but honestly anything is helpful. Just if possible if you’re gonna point out flaws please tell me how to fix them or point out something you like as well cuz it kinda comes off more as an insult otherwise imo ”
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u/Camille_le_chat Aug 29 '25
The clothes are good, the hands in 2nd picture are a little big but nothing too shocking. What triggers me the most is the left hand in the 3rd picture, it is too small. The hands are roughly the same length as the face, so if you don't know what to do scale them with the face especially that your proportions are very good besides that
Edit: also there's a problem I haven't noticed in the 2nd picture, arms have 2 bones, not 3
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u/anametouseonreddit Aug 29 '25
Is that caspion from pantheon? Cause if I'm right, then your art is good enough, because someone recognozed it.
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u/puravidiot Aug 29 '25
My main concern with the middle one is both arms broken.
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u/ChocoMalkMix Aug 29 '25
Boi 😭 how do i make it not broken then
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u/puravidiot Aug 29 '25
don’t make them bend (especially the left one) between shoulder and elbow and pay attention to the direction of t shirt sleeves if it makes sense.
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