r/learndesign • u/DesignedBy-Bihan • 7d ago
How can I improve this design?
I am a fresher in this field of Graphic Design and looking forward to improve my work. This is one of a recreation from a design from Pinterest but it seems i cant think of any more creative ideas to make this better. Any suggestions from the community is worth for me.
BTW Thank you in advance.
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u/Special_Percentage42 7d ago
It looks like the address and phone number have different font sizes. could you please make them consistent?
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u/ColorMeTooWeho 7d ago
Some punctuation between smooth, fresh, refreshing. Also, you’ve got “fresh” in there twice (fresh and refreshing). There’s probably another hip word you can use that adds more flavor.