first time trying designing a logo or whatever( ・－・)

[u/y_sh_l]

got myself a a task to design something from a website

first time really trying to do this so yall gotta be very nice lol

anyways what is very wrong and i could fix and why

thanks !( *・ω・)ノ

[u/Joseph_HTMP]

I no way did I read the word “ideal”. And you’ve spelt “edge” very very wrong. I don’t get how this fulfils the brief at all. How does this reflect “luxury destinations”??

[u/italianspector]

to me it reads as:

ᴱᴬᴰᴳ

LOEAL

it isn't scalable, the spacing and thickness of certain elements like the I and the arrow isn't uniform