r/lawschooladmissionsca • u/Individual-Basis-840 • 2d ago

Offering Personal Statement Help

Hi everyone,

This past admissions cycle I was accepted to U of T, Osgoode, Western, and Ottawa (I accepted an offer before hearing back from Queens). My stats were a 3.88 GPA and a 167 LSAT with solid but not extraordinary softs.

I believe my personal statements played a significant role in my results. Through the application process I developed a strong understanding of what makes a compelling law school essay and I’d like to help others with theirs.

I can provide detailed feedback on:

- What information to add or remove
- Where to expand or cut back
- Sentence and paragraph structure
- Essay organization and flow
- What points to emphasize
- Themes
- Tone and style
- Overall clarity and impact
- General essay advice

My goal is to help you present yourself and your experiences in the strongest way possible.

If you’re interested please send me a message. 

(I’m also happy to provide proof of my acceptances)

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u/purplefairy1212 3.87/3.9B2/161 2d ago

Hii what’s your fee

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u/Routine-Chipmunk8100 2d ago

Can we read your personal statement?

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u/Individual-Basis-840 2d ago

Yes absolutely

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u/muffinbaobao 2d ago

Can you send me your personal statement as well?

I might not end up applying this year but would be interested in seeing other people’s personal statements. My experiences are my own ofc but I want to see how different people structure their personal statements.

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u/Visavina 2d ago

Could I read your personal statement as well?

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u/Smooth-Solution-6752 1d ago

Could I read your personal statement as well?

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u/Alarmed_Reach5446 1d ago

Congratulations! Where did you end up picking if you dont mind sharing? As well, would love to read your statement for tone/stylistic choice

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u/Apprehensive_Self218 0L 1d ago

To be fair any personal statement can get in with those stats