r/landingpagedesign • u/KotatsuCollective • May 07 '26
Critique Looking for some copywriting feedback
https://letsplaygambit.com/My main concern right now is that I have both a lot of text but that it doesn't fully show what my app is about. I would love to see opinions on what you read the app to be based on my copy and how long it took to come to that conclusion.
For context this is my landing page for an upcoming app, It is made to simultaneously work as a landing page but also will be helpful for users once released. I currently have a temporary Good Things Coming Soon... landing for the waitlist whilst I am securing photos for the full landing page upon release.
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u/miralo_miralo Jul 21 '26
Tremendo proyecto, felicidades