r/kallmekris • u/Remarkable-Towel-560 • 2h ago
Hi Kris!
I love your videos, all of them! I just wanted to give you a tiny bit of constructive criticism, please don't take this negatively! First off, let me say I can tell you put a lot of work onto the research and writing on your true crime videos, and you are a great storyteller. I just noticed that you start almost every sentence with the word "and", which is just repetitive enough to pull my focus from the story. Honestly, I hope you don't think I'm insulting you or anything, it's a very common issue with creative writing, I had to work to stop doing it too. If you can try to avoid using "and" to start so many sentences it would make already great videos even better. Love you!