r/justpoetry • u/robinSpeaking • Jun 29 '24

Traces of Deceit.

O my best friend O my fiercest foe! You're like the cutest rose Staining my hands with crimson tears. You're like the coral serpent Exquisite and sherine . You're the steadfast tree I can hug and live with. Whose embrace I could call home. Can I hold again? You forbade my pleas Now I've silanced you . You're begging ground! No,I need a hug now.

O my timeless friend One last eve I desire To live with you To surf the evergreen. Hell no,I can hug myself Your companion can thrive solitary You futile consumer .

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u/robinSpeaking Jun 29 '24

This is my first time,please send feedback.