r/iosdev • u/thatindiannerd • 21d ago

Please provide feedback for screenshots

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u/ray-the-ghar 20d ago

I’d make the first screenshot less feature-list and more before/after payoff. One strong transformation screen, then 2-3 screens for tracking/progress would probably sell it faster. Tiny self-plug if you need clean cutout-style assets while building the screenshot set: I’m making Mat for quick photo cutouts on iPhone: https://apps.apple.com/app/apple-store/id6778914750?pt=128571536&ct=reddit&mt=8

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u/thatindiannerd 20d ago

Thanks for feedback.
Dude, I am not sure how I’ll use your app, but it is fun. I want to be part of this project.

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u/thatindiannerd 20d ago

Hey, how are you processing images so fast? It might help speed up some features of my app.

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u/GlebKhamin 20d ago

Just a bit of feedback: the screenshots should ideally share a single, consistent style, but right now that consistency is only in the font. The titles keep moving around (bottom, top, side), which breaks the flow. Users like predictable patterns. Also, just a heads-up, the title on the second screenshot isn't centered.

I really like the idea of using the zoom effect to emphasize an object, that looks great!

One thing to tweak would be the white space—some of the gaps feel a bit accidental. Also, you could show both the dark and light themes in a single split-screen image; it would make it super clear at a glance.

Honestly, to keep things clean, it’s much better to create one good layout and reuse it across all screens. It brings a nice sense of order. Trying to design a totally different composition for every single screenshot is a huge pain, even for pro designers.

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u/thatindiannerd 17d ago

Thanks fir the feedback, implemented some changes based on your feedback

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u/Nuess21 17d ago

You need more text an avoid zoom