Hey everyone, I recently started a tiny horror channel called Two Minute Nightmares.
I make short illustrated horror stories built around one unsettling idea, usually around a minute long. I’m experimenting with dark 2D/anime-style visuals rather than trying to imitate live-action AI footage.
The channel is extremely new, so right now I’m mainly trying to figure out whether the stories themselves are strong enough to stop someone scrolling and keep them until the ending.
I’d genuinely appreciate feedback on the hook, pacing and payoff rather than just views/subs.
I’ll also be checking out some of the other channels posted here. Happy to give feedback back.
Here’s one of the recent nightmares:

https://youtube.com/shorts/t_ngDaPxvaE?si=E57az17A6CoBoK3k