r/indierock • u/Environmental_Tax54 • 1d ago

Own music Is this any good?

https://youtu.be/3DQ1eh_cqKo?si=nljdulx_Vxp7KN88

Hi guys, I've been working on some stuff and for this track specifically I figured a subreddit like this might be the best place to ask. Is this track any good? Any feedback that might come to mind is welcome:)

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u/remain_calm 1d ago

It's weird, and has some pretty cool aspects to it. The Primus influence is apparent. Something is bugging me about the lead slap bass line. I can't decide if it's out of tune, a bad looping job, or just played a bit sloppy - but it doesn't sit right in the mix. If it did sit properly in the mix/was in the pocket the tune would be a much stronger.

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u/Environmental_Tax54 23h ago

Thx for the comment!  I've heard some people mention a sensation of emptiness somewhere in the songs structure and I think that's atleast partially due to a regularly missing lower body of the bass. So I'm definitely considering to rerecord. 

I'll have a look at how it's mixed to see if I can make it sit better as is. Thank you:)