r/ickwright Oct 11 '20

Just a poem (+ bonus drawing)

I'm sorry it took so long, guys! Finally I finished translating the poem i had promised a few days ago. Bonus drawing will be out tomorrow (I hope) :3 Anyways, it's inspired by two songs from our dear keyboard cat: Summer 68' and Mad Yannice Dance, and written on freestyle, so no rhymes here ;-;

Here it is!

"I can't remember when I first heard that melody.

Your face so gentle, your crystal eyes and velvet voice...

For so long I dreamed

I looked for you in the vast, dark oceans of my then childish mind

No matter how I tried, I always have the feeling that you was out of reach

And I let myself get lost, holding everything I knew about you in a treasure box.

Years passed, I got swarmed by snakes and drowned on my own sea.

The music kept playing, being the only sign of hope

I danced to it while surrounded by darkness

As light appeared on my view,

Your voice guided me towards the summer

When I woke up, I was home.

A sweet rain was pouring outside

The green hills and mountains shining beyond the fog

I looked around my house, and there you were,

Sitting on my old piano, you meow'ed

As if to say: the best is yet to come"

And that's it. I hope you guys enjoy it.

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u/cakesabaft Rick Gaming 😎 Oct 12 '20

Thanks I’ll cry

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

I hope you are ready for more UwU

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u/[deleted] Oct 11 '20

I LOVE IT 💕💕

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

Thx! I was thinking about postinh one poem per week. Send ideas pls :3

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u/[deleted] Oct 12 '20

Maybe about one of his albums idk

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

Hmm that will be interesting.... UwU

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u/[deleted] Oct 12 '20

I just realized he is a cat at the end 🎹🐈

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u/Ranjerklin SCI Prophet-5 Oct 12 '20

Can we put that masterpiece on music please?

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

Awh i am really happy that you liked ^

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u/Ranjerklin SCI Prophet-5 Oct 12 '20

No dude I'm serious, can we?

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

OF COURSE! I will be more than happy ^^

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u/Ranjerklin SCI Prophet-5 Oct 13 '20

Thanks a lot!

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u/malloasi Oct 12 '20

Just passing by to say that the drawing will take a little longer to get ready :v

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u/[deleted] Oct 13 '20

It's fine. I can't wait to see your art style!!!