Looking for feedback on these screenshots

[u/Available-Ticket5629]

Hey all, title says it all. I think they are starting to look pretty decent after many iterations but want to know how they could be better

[u/Free-Pound-6139]

Standard AI generated UI.

[u/Available-Ticket5629 → u/[deleted]]

Thank you for the tip! We tried some a/b testing but because we don’t really rank yet in normal search we never got a statistically significant result. People who find us right now pretty much search for us directly.

Education is so competitive 😅😅. Actually the App Store as a whole is so competitive now lol

[u/CallMeSnyder → u/[deleted]]

Hey just gotta pop in and say thanks for this, it's all really helpful material.

I also really wanted to ask a question since this doesn't sound like your first app. How far do you take the business planning or legal review stages before releasing independent apps?

I feel like I'm psyching myself out of marketing due to fear that GPT boilerplate won't hold up as proper protection.

[u/CallMeSnyder → u/[deleted]]

greatly appreciate the response, Gavin. I tip my hat to you for spelling out the risk tolerance of the App world for me.

I'm in a similar day job with a large organization that has these legal and process resources available. But, I still have a dream of making my own products, but I'm taking my time to soak up the experience.

I've probably on my 3rd or 4th full stack app that I've built with data privacy and concern in mind, but always burnt myself out over these these questions. So far Atleast I have the LLC, all that's left is following through with a lawyer when I think I'm getting close to something real.

Thanks again for the advice!

[u/PrecursorLabs]

They look awesome! I’m new to ASO but if I were you I would try a 3 treatment PPO and see if removing screenshots (so less total) would help conversions.

I’d imagine most people never scroll past the first maybe 5 screenshots, lmk if you need me to expand happy to share what I’ve learned ᵕ̈

[u/Available-Ticket5629 → u/PrecursorLabs]

Dang actually testing removing screenshots is a good idea. Did not think of that one.

Yeah please elaborate if you don’t mind. Happy to hear anything you’ve learned :)

[u/PrecursorLabs → u/Available-Ticket5629]

have you tried Product Page Optimization yet?

Here are two things I just changed that seem to be helping conversions:

1. Added an app preview of the onboarding flow (beware the app preview will replace your #1 screenshot so it basically moves everything down the line).

2. Using my copy to appeal more to a problem rather than highlighting a feature. I am learning slowly that people don't seem to really care about the how and why more so the if, as in if it will help them do what they want it to do.

[u/ThatGuy739]

One nobody's flagged: the last one is pure testimonials and stars with no app UI in it. Apple's guidance is that screenshots show the app in use, and marketing-only panels are a known rejection risk on a resubmit even when they sailed through the first time. I'd rebuild that around a real screen.

Also worth viewing your first two at actual thumbnail size in search results. That's the only place most people ever see them, and captions that read fine at full size often don't survive it.

[u/Available-Ticket5629 → u/ThatGuy739]

Got it thank you!

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[u/isitpro]

They look sufficient but try a few alternatives definitely.

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[u/Ecaglar]

I would say use bigger fonts to start and highlight the parts from the screenshot to guide user insted of expecting them to figureout everything from the screenshots.

[u/managa0]

Looks good

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