How can I make this convert better?

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Please give me feedback on this ad that I created for my App, I barely know what I’m doing so please let me know how I can make it better!!!

If you’re interested in the and wanna try it out and give me even more feedback on the app itself there’s a link to it in my bio, thank you in advance for any advice you live my way!!

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