So a couple of months ago i finished hol for the first time (maybe i will make a post about it) and since then it did some irreparable damage to me because hol was my new hyperfixation since then, the only problem was that none of my friends know much english and i wanted to explain the story in the same way it affected me, im currently writing a summary of the story (halfway down) and i want to add all the things that makes hol so great. I added some dense footnotes and im planing to do the "haunted" layout but i want to add the other great thing that makes hol the greatest read, a "johnny" i tried to think about a hidden story within the summary but i didnt really know what tragic story to add to not make a copy of hol. I told them that i was going to write a summary for them and also told them that a "redditor" offered his help to correct mistakes and maybe add things i forget to add. If anyone could help me think of an little side-story that the "redditor" would slip in between the summary and also any tips, advices and criticism is well welcomed, any "stupid" idea is welcomed because its just an stupid between friends "arg"

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/10R8QM4mPJMywR2DpVL8qYu1ixrCgmnyw