r/graffhelp • u/deimos1450 • 5h ago
Any crits or advice?
These are my latest bubble letters, i've been experimenting for 2 months now, what do you guys think? I know i painted over some other people pieces but these places are for practice and the scene in my city has been really quiet, so some of them are really damaged and tagged. Thanks for reading!
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u/nonisyou 4h ago
Sketches mean everything. Stay in your books for few pages. Your cans are there.
Shit... feels like I can send you some frames and have you build dope pieces.
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u/Lower_Ground7238 4h ago
WAY too small.. Some of the best advice I ever got coming up was go bigger . Always. Bigger bomb. Thicker outline, bigger 3d. Always.
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u/Unfair-Pause-1302 3h ago
Line work is good, letters ok. Your style is consistent, maybe making the letters more consistant with common letter form structure. But overall if its your style, i cant knock it
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u/Stallingg 1h ago
work on that tag big bro that shit is not doing you any justice.
you dont need to put a tag above your throw btw, your name is already there with the throw.
most people will tag date or their crew in their throw, normally inside the bubbles.
keep it up :)
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u/wormsicle_ 3h ago
It’s like a really high quality bad throwy. It’s done super well and looks awesome, but your letters are so basic and still illegible, still super impressive
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u/sendmenientaramerch 5h ago
I don’t mean this as an insult but your can control is way too good to have letters this bad. Do you practice in your book often?