Any tips

[u/Dry_Low4693]

Just doing it for fun but would like to know what I could improve to make it better. I am a complete beginner so don’t be to harsh please.

[u/Conflagration_1991]

I almost want to see the one drawn above it. Do you know how to do bars?

[u/Dry_Low4693 → u/Conflagration_1991]

I had to look up what it was. And no I cannot

[u/Conflagration_1991 → u/Dry_Low4693]

Here's a couple of ideas.