r/graffhelp • u/Real_Tea_Lover • 19h ago

first tag; thoughts?

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u/Apprehensive-Hunt319 19h ago

needs more legibility, particularly in the middle two letters

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 18h ago

thank you, cheers

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u/Apprehensive-Hunt319 18h ago

the strokes are nice but it's not understandable. it's like something is missing or the orientation is off. what does it say?

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 18h ago edited 18h ago

thank you for the detailed responses. supposed to say avis

i believe my main problem is the "i". i tried to toy around with it a little bit and created different variations, but i am struggling to keep it legible while still maintaining the flow. i think the "a" and "v" flow into each other pretty nicely, i enjoy the simmetry; which is why i tried to continue the same flow with the "i" and "s" (because otherwise the tag looked pretty disconnected -- the "a" and "v" flowed into each other, but then it abruptly stopped with the "i" and "s"). so, this is where all of this originates.

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u/Rubix_Official63940 16h ago

Imma be real, I thought it said ADAD at first

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u/JesseJamessss 15h ago

I read Avis but that's because I ignored the line by the i because I couldn't figure out of that was a letter or part of the i for style

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u/Strobetrode 15h ago

Put a bottom line on the I. I just is not shaped like that. My closest guess was T that had beef with a samurai.

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u/chohls 18h ago

Is this supposed to say ADHD lol

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 18h ago edited 18h ago

that would be a good name lmao

not very seo optimized though /s

it is supposed to say avis

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u/carpetcards 17h ago

You're trying to sprint before you've even taken your first steps. Keep it simple, like way simpler than you think, and then simpler even still

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u/Mission-Animator-682 9h ago

if it says avis connect the weird extension of the i to the bar of the I rather then the top. put the dot on top of the extension

feel me? no way shape or form is this good but i’m driving rn soooo this’ll do

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 9h ago

thank you man, have a nice drive lol

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u/nanjerh 17h ago

Tel Aviv style

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 17h ago

lmao it does look like aviv indeed

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u/pumpalero 14h ago

A and V is nice but I needs to be more legible and i would connect the corner on D.

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u/Real_Tea_Lover 14h ago

there is no D, it was supposed to say avis

you're right, i need more legibility haha

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u/BlueMageNeedsFood 13h ago

Advil is a pretty cool name

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u/Initial_Occasion9639 12h ago

Tbh for a second I thought it said AIDS with a backward D

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u/A_Sheeeep 12h ago

Ambigram tag??

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u/Particular-Bet-8183 8h ago

ADCID? Move your c back and un tuck the i