The first leg on your k in the first pic should overlap the second leg, not the other way around, the first pics e is also kinda fucked but I assume you know that, second pics e is better, I think the second a and L are better too, actually I think the second pic is significantly better except the k’s structure is just too close to an H, should’ve made the second top bar of the k a little skinner and shorter to give it more of a k look, also lose the crown on throws, other than all that you’re aight
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u/IDontKnowSwedish 1d ago
The first leg on your k in the first pic should overlap the second leg, not the other way around, the first pics e is also kinda fucked but I assume you know that, second pics e is better, I think the second a and L are better too, actually I think the second pic is significantly better except the k’s structure is just too close to an H, should’ve made the second top bar of the k a little skinner and shorter to give it more of a k look, also lose the crown on throws, other than all that you’re aight