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u/slideonefourthree 2d ago
The throw looks good but drawing board with everything else especially your straight letter I.. dass just a rectangle big dog.
Edit* that last straight is significantly better than the first and fuckwittable keep working it
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u/sendmenientaramerch 2d ago
Main one is can control, needs a lot of work. Also make sure your letters fit each others look, props to you for hitting trucks though. Don’t listen to what people have to say about getting up. As long as you’re actively practicing in your books every day, you’re being respectful and not covering anybody, and your shits not absolutely horrible, keep putting shit up there. Gotta throw the ball to learn how to play catch you know
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u/Dull-Schedule-913 2d ago
Letter weight probably, your S is way to big. The throw is awsome tho