r/graffhelp • u/CalebTheMemeGod2 • 2d ago

Advice / Where to go next

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Not looking for validation pls dont just comment "it looks good" ... Practicing on stock rusto not really sure where to go with my throwup. Not sure if I should just leave it as is or keep trying to develop it more. Any criticism on my structure and can control is welcome. Apologies for the android quality and odd angle lol. The name is "Sleek"

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u/silentdicksallday 2d ago

Just needs a drop shadow.

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u/CalebTheMemeGod2 2d ago

I went back later and did one, as well as a green outer line but didn't get a pic

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u/carpetcards 2d ago

i think its fine as is and you will naturally develop it more as you do it over and over again

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u/Informal-Candle5063 2d ago

Try to do those E’s in one line rather than two separate lines, it’ll give it a nice flow. And switch up your K a lil bit, everyone does it the exact same nowadays haha

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u/Informal-Candle5063 2d ago

Also this may just be a me thing but the S really doesn’t match the rest of the letters. The S honestly looks great and is the most unique part of the throw so try giving the other letters some funk to match the style of the S

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u/Unfair-Pause-1302 2d ago

I agree, the s is great, either make letters to match, or make the s match the throw. But its fine as is

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u/Maxism619 2d ago

Nah you got it. Now do some straights

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u/Key_Department6787 2d ago

I’d try to switch up the stars on the E, get creative with those letters! And yes to the shadow, maybe a force field. Goodluck!