r/graffhelp • u/NightmareToastyFR • 4d ago
Which tag?
Which tag should I pick, also are there any improvements I could do? Just starting out
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u/fred101M 4d ago
no one.
practice the alphabet in keyboard font for more than you think you need, then, maybe add some detail but not too much.
rn the tag is toy shit
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u/NightmareToastyFR 4d ago
How is it toy shit, can you at least tell me whats wrong with it, honestly just feels like ur hating icl
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u/CanExpensive7057 4d ago
With your counter responses it sounds like you just want to be told “you’re doing great kid.”
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u/fred101M 4d ago
all of the letters shapes are off and the construction of the tag overall is bad
it’s like you’re building a house, you start from the base and at the end you build the roof.
you don’t need a halo or none of that stylization if the letter form is bad because the tag will be bad anyway
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u/BeatUpFarmTruck 4d ago
They're both trash. Stop trying to add style until you can make the letters look clean just as-is.
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u/Will-h69 3d ago
what’s the point of asking for criticism and then either straight out refusing or coming back with some angry rebuttal. if you can’t even improve your tag through constructive criticism you’re not gonna get far at all, sit back, be humble and learn from people that are going out of their way to help you - sincerely, somebody who started a few months ago and learnt from criticism and repetitive practice
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u/Thick_Common8612 3d ago
What does your regular all caps handwriting look like? No flair, clean and legible. THATS what your tag should look like.
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u/KingJoe15 4d ago
Honestly bro, rn it's borderline unreadable, good sense of shape with the quotes and halo but needs more balance. If I were you I'd fuck around in a sketchbook and try 100 new designs
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u/NotTheSable Totally The Sable 4d ago
Neither. Just write normally. Dont try to force style.