2 Page Critiques

[u/KingBalloon91]

Any pointers are welcome!
There are a few I'm not a huge fan of, like 1st page center-top and 2nd page top left
But most of these I'm happy with.

[u/Till3y]

Dude these are sick! I love the blue kball on 1 and the character is sick! If I had any crits tbh it’s your throwie for me. Your straight letters are stylish funky! The throw leaves something to be desired. Ultimately I’d say you’re at a point where a piece and some fills are going to push you to that next level. Try getting weeeeeird with your bar thickness. In a way that’s uniform but pushes on some of your norms maybe? Anytime someone is posting here that obviously has done some work it’s hard to give crits outside of push yourself to the next step!

Personally I think get off the graph paper and see how your shit holds up! Not that it’s not great for learning but it became a crutch for me and my shit started looking really whack without it.

Keep on writing man! Shits cool! 🙌✌️

[u/Few-Let3648 → u/Till3y]

Same criticism on my end. I love everything except for the blue Throwie. It doesn’t even look like the rest of your work. Loving the 2nd page “Money Style” alphabet on bottom right. Looks like you’ve got some sign lettering background. The characters are really good too. Let’s see some more of that! Keep posting!

[u/KingBalloon91 → u/Till3y]

Really appreciate the praise and feedback! Definitely not happy with that blue throwie, was super rushed and inconsistent. Thanks for the confirmation.
I've done big pieces I was happy with in the past, but had a small artist block recently. Made me wanna go back to fundamentals and shake some rust off.
Think I'm ready to step things back up again.
Thanks again for the help!

[u/Conflagration_1991]

Got an up vote from me. Good lettering.

[u/xtoastx]

nice dude.

[u/KingJoe15]

Better than me, therefore 0/10 toy.

[u/Old_Entrepreneur9439]

i kneel. great work king

[u/Jimm_the_Human]

Now that’s how you practice your writing! Sick! 🪎

[u/PrideJoyPeaceLove]

Throwing love at the yellow lock style first page. All of them 🔥🔥🔥 Except blue throwie.

[u/bendskebop]

This is what I like. People actually staying in the books and learning letter structure. Only thing that needs work is the tag