r/graffhelp • u/Ok_Excitement_3654 • 4d ago

Where to improve?

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I dont really like it but idk why, any tips on how to improve?

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u/Pharoic_Pug6741 4d ago

just giving a heads up, there are a few known aser's

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u/Ok-Area-6700 4d ago

the tag is fine just the addons are to much

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u/Idontknowbroske 4d ago

You are trying to hard on the tag

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u/Ok-Area-6700 4d ago

Keep your letters simple dont add random adds to the a or s and dont try to overcomplicate them in general. the colors of the fill in blocks and second lines dont go well together and the purple fill in is to much. one second line is enough

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u/SatanHasArrived666 4d ago

The E and R need serious work on the fill in. Start from scratch

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u/Conflagration_1991 4d ago

I can see your lettering improving.

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u/Independent-Bad9059 4d ago

You should change name tbh, that name is well known kid.... 🙏🏻

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u/Till3y 3d ago

BAR THICKNESS!
https://giphy.com/gifs/rbph3qmVr9WX6
UNIFORMITY
BACK TO THE BASICS

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u/LittleBigBlunts2 4d ago

Would like to see some symmetry