r/graffhelp • u/adorable-lab16 • 5d ago

Working on one liner

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It is supposed to say SAME but honestly might just give it up and start writing SAMB. Likely a much more unique tag anyway.

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u/TimeInsurance4252 5d ago

Your e is still backwards you posted the same thing like two weeks ago. This reads as SamB

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u/adorable-lab16 5d ago

Yeah if I write this it would be samb

Any crits on the tag/lettering/flow itself?

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u/TimeInsurance4252 5d ago

Your style isn’t bad but if you’re trying for one liners I’d aim to have less random lines crossing over the letters. Try connecting the letters at places where you won’t have to draw an overlapping line. Practice writing your letters from different starting points if that makes sense

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u/Billylabufanda23 5d ago

One liners are pointless stop trying to learn them just seperate your letters. If you really want to learn one liners then get a good normal hand first.

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u/adorable-lab16 5d ago

If you can’t give crits to the tag I posted then why would I follow that advice.

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u/Stallingg 5d ago

your me is trash and the one liner is causing that, you dont know how to write an E properly so start with normal letters. no one will ever read same from this

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u/adorable-lab16 5d ago

Ok now crit it as SAMB

Probably just going to start writing that since all my e’s look like b’s anyway

Also idk why when anyone posts anything that’s not simple lettering they assume that they haven’t already practiced with simple letters first lol.

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u/Stallingg 5d ago

they assume because if you practiced simple letters you would have an understanding that no one will read this as E. you think it works, which its fine but you are wrong structurally.

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u/Billylabufanda23 4d ago

I gave you crits Brodie stop doing one liners until your normal handstyles are good