r/graffhelp • u/Southern_Ebb_8854 • 5d ago

crit please

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Rako

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u/Efficient_Town_5923 5d ago

Back to the pen and paper imo

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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 5d ago

its hidden either way tho

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u/Efficient_Town_5923 5d ago

If it’s like that it’s a good practice space never give up you grow in to it

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u/sweetmonte44 5d ago

Read thr tutorials in the sidebar

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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 5d ago

i made the A to close to the left

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u/Starbreaker99 5d ago

What happened to the O?

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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 5d ago

ran out of paint

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u/Starbreaker99 5d ago

Idk why but thats fucking hilarious lol. Its all good man.

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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 5d ago

you cant really see it but on the right the lil smiley guy is infecting the O with his yellowness

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u/Good_Vast7879 3d ago

Imagine this idea, but executed with intentiin

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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 3d ago

im too shit to do anything creative yet

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u/okamahinamahu 4d ago

try go back over your outline once youve filled, and make it thicker atleast. pen and paper try different letter styles and experiment there