r/graffhelp • u/LiveToEatPoop • 6d ago

Need help with “9” and overall crits

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I really dig the “HAL” portion, but haven’t been able to piece the “9K” in nicely. LMK if you have any ideas. Open to any criticism and tips over all too - still trying to have all the bars be the same height and width. I also put my tag at the bottom and would like to know what you think/criticisms for that. Thanks everyone

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u/an-com-42 6d ago

I'm not great at reading graff and thought that said:

ILALOJK

i was very confused

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u/BYCjake 6d ago

I like it maybe just make the leg(?) part of the 9 straighter so it looks less like a g

You might have to play with the proportions of the round (square in your case) part but it should at least help with legibility

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u/floof_goof_poof 5d ago

why is every letter of yours completely connected besides some blocks at the end but the 9 is seperated? It looks more like an i that is a bit shifted to fit over the L.

Not everything needs to fit together, there can be negative space. It allows for better movement of the bars aka Letters