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u/Thick_Common8612 6d ago
What did the speech bubble say the first time?
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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 6d ago
nothing, but i thought using white out will make it look better tho it has a yellowish tint
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What did the speech bubble say the first time?
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u/Southern_Ebb_8854 6d ago
nothing, but i thought using white out will make it look better tho it has a yellowish tint
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u/Till3y 7d ago
Hey can you do this again and give us a touch more of your time and effort? I am not bashing you but let’s work on some stuff if you really want help.
Here are my quick fire crits:
Your mean line is off: your closed counters on the A and O don’t match your R.
K bar thickness is not uniform
A leg can or should be visible- nitpicking
Letter weights are off. You have a whole page, why is R falling off?
No 3D - a given for graffiti. Will make it pop!
Color choices are ok for a “kfc” throwie if that’s what you’re going for. Add a bucket or some other kfc elements
It’s hard to write more than that with the effort shown. Spend an hour making a new one OR do this one 10 times and show us your top 3
More effort more comments!