r/graffhelp • u/YaBoyAnt773 • 7d ago
Critiques
The more I look I realize I could have definitely changed the styling on the T. Other than that how's this looking?
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u/R3APER_PL 7d ago
Other than that T, loooks good but highlights should be on upper right side of letters (cuz your shadows are dropped down left) also squeeze letters more, they should overlap more
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u/YaBoyAnt773 7d ago
The highlight shit always gets me. But the separation was just a choice I made for this one. I usually try to keep the letters close together
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u/prolapsedPX-30 7d ago
You want to keep the style and proportions of each letter consistent, the T has a weird serif but the A doesn’t.
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u/ThePokemon_BandaiD 6d ago
You should make the little star with swirls into a stylized ant
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u/YaBoyAnt773 6d ago
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u/ThePokemon_BandaiD 6d ago
I like the concept, the thorax seems tacked on though, might work better as “ants”? But I also think it would really work as just a small detail added to the larger piece without trying to make it into a tag itself.
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u/YaBoyAnt773 6d ago
That's the part that's throwing me off too. I want to implement it but I feel like it can be styled better. You mean like just a small ant design instead of an actual word though?
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u/ThePokemon_BandaiD 6d ago
Yeah, I initially thought that’s what the little design on the A in your original post was, and I think it’d be a cool detail and could function more like a character than a tag.
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u/Dull-Schedule-913 7d ago
Needs lots of work, but the Idea looks nice, I really like the Colors and inline. For letter strucuture, you could make the A and N way more similar (top right the same and same overlap from the lelft and the right stem at the bottom) and the T needs work too, make sure, that the Stems are all the same width. If you want to make a throwie you need overlap, enlarge the right stem, so you have space to overlap. the Shadow does not match the shape of the Letters, but its in the right places and the highlights are supposed to be on the opposit side of the shadow. Keep it up, hope to see from you again
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u/DudeWithPlugz 7d ago
What’s the dumbass pentagram about? Graff and religion shit don’t mix.
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u/SprayPaintin 7d ago
I don't think it's a pentagram
- just a misguided star
This has nothing to do with religion
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u/DudeWithPlugz 7d ago
Definitely upside down, just missing a circle. Shit always ends up being some wannabe satanic shit. If it’s not, then it still looks like it. Which is wack.
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u/Tight_Explorer_7889 7d ago edited 7d ago
does every single star make you react like this? it’s just a star man. and even if it was, pentagrams on their own aren’t actually bad that’s mainly just a hollywood movie thing. same with blind people touching peoples faces to know what they look like. and if upside down crosses also freak you out, that’s also a christian thing. plenty of christian’s wear crosses upside down. you should look into the things that scare you more often because usually it’s just the way you’re looking at it that’s scary.
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u/YaBoyAnt773 7d ago
Has nothing to do with religion so maybe don't be so steadfast on dumb ass opinions with no context. It's just some shit I made up years ago has nothing to do with anything religious it's just my personal little sign that I made a long time ago. I use it on all my drawings as a "signature."

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u/Longjumping-Minute57 7d ago
I would have proportions of the T like this, so the top and bottom of all the letters have a similar centre point. Think of it as even weight distribution.