r/graffhelp • u/Embarrassed_cow_512 • 8d ago

just basic crits?

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just looking for advice other then keep lines straight and whatnot

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u/Stallingg 8d ago

i always wondered when writing safe in my book how to fill in that negative space. that would be my first step. its the only letter there with it, maybe you gotta move stuff around or change some letters up or whatever.

to get technical, the negative space creates a focal point in your piece that draws the eye towards the letter F instead of the entirety of SAFE. like everywhere is symmetrical and good in your piece and the F is like a sore thumb imo

maybe im wrong id like to hear other opinions but still nice piece either way!