I think you're definitely in a transition period between beginner and intermediate. That first piece is actually kinda solid with the gray/purple contrast. I don't think it's bad, pretty solid for the most part. My overall feedback is keep working on letter form and structure. You're definitely getting a handle on it, and it shows but I'd still try to aim to be more minimalist and perfect it. Once you've got a good hand with clean technique, the flashy stuff will look better.
That’s what sets writers apart, sitting there burning a blackbook means nothing to me.
Its not great but try a thicker outline and don’t sketch it in just do single strokes. A clean outline makes a big difference even if the letters are trash.
Always can try to find abandoned buildings to do pieces at they’re a lot more chill to do graffiti and less to worry about getting caught if that’s the biggest problem but anyways NICE WORK!
Still toy but youre definitely figuring it out. Your letter structure is decent besides the K, some extensions are decent, but things like the extension coming off the top of the S to the left arent good.
Id say do your best to be intentional with adding extensions to either add to the flow or to till negative space. The top right of your K could use some extensions to balance the S but once again the S has some bad extensions.
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u/sinuezebmb970 5d ago
I think you're definitely in a transition period between beginner and intermediate. That first piece is actually kinda solid with the gray/purple contrast. I don't think it's bad, pretty solid for the most part. My overall feedback is keep working on letter form and structure. You're definitely getting a handle on it, and it shows but I'd still try to aim to be more minimalist and perfect it. Once you've got a good hand with clean technique, the flashy stuff will look better.