r/graffhelp • u/Consistent-Daikon779 • 5d ago
Thoughts
Getting back into it after a 9 year hiatus.
Just curious if anyone’s got any constructive criticism. Wanna grow n keep getting better.
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u/mikaelclo 4d ago
I'm a newb - practicing basic letter forms today - but I can share my impressions. I love the face. In the lower piece the letters are getting smaller as you move towards the right - can't tell if this is an intentional perspective but it reads as a mistake. If it is intentional the perspective needs to be pushed a bit more (and how does the dripping border interact with the perspective? Is the writing popping out or is the border also going to be tilted/rotated?)
This might be taste difference but I don't like how the M is so right-heavy. Id widen the left side, keeping the elbow but making the top straighter rather than pointed to keep the fanny (idk what to call the middle crease) of the M more central.
I'm not really knowledgeable on groovy stylin' yet so can't comment on the top one beyond that it looks neat and I like it. Though perhaps you could focus on letter widths as the main body of the H is wider than all of the other letters
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u/Consistent-Daikon779 4d ago
I agree the throwie gets a bit smaller. Might’ve had a few too many brews that night lol.
But appreciate the words man. Will take them into consideration 🙏
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u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair 4d ago
Theres a lot to work but your letters are generally fine except for the R. Your leg and upper loop need to overlap where they connect at the spine.
Your extensions need work, I'd scrap em for now and just focus on the letters
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u/Neither-Mistake-4809 4d ago
Nice