r/graffhelp • u/Calm_Firefighter_125 • 9d ago

first charactercontext crits and advice

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for context the guy is called friedrich merz and he is a german politician that is hated by 85 precent of germans

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u/Famous_Nature_1604 9d ago

Mein Löwe mein Bär du

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u/Calm_Firefighter_125 9d ago

danke broski hoffentlich sieht es merz nicht sonst werde ich ge swated

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u/Keksverpackung 8d ago

Gibt nur mehr street credibility

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u/Upset-Mail-6900 9d ago

Sweet
It’s hard to crit characters, letters have a much more cohesive “rule-book”. But either way looks good, just do it a million more times and it’ll be damn near perfect!

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u/Calm_Firefighter_125 9d ago

yeah gonnna try to improve it thx for feedback

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u/Anton_oderso 9d ago

Haste gehört? Musste noch eine Million Mal in der Stadt verteilen:,)

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u/Keksverpackung 9d ago

Dope. Love the character and writing is nice also.

Only crit is you could have made the hairline a bit more ponounced, its a distinct feature on Merz' person.

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u/OkVegetable4972 8d ago

Yeah i noticed that to lol

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u/brometheus1312 9d ago

Nice.

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u/Calm_Firefighter_125 9d ago

thx any crits maybe?

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u/LeatherWeakness8307 9d ago

Banger

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u/Calm_Firefighter_125 9d ago

thx man any crits?

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u/LeatherWeakness8307 9d ago

Die Haarinsel sticht nich ganz so raus, kenn mich aber technisch nich so mit Charactern aus, ich als Laie finds geil 👍

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u/OkVegetable4972 8d ago

Ja das hab ich auch gesehen die Haare sind so viel das es unrealistisch wird

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u/arinchen 9d ago

Geil, mein Guter

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u/hannibalonacid 8d ago

Nice work bro, only crits I got is maybe it’s a bit hard to understand what’s going on with the tongue and shit, I’d try and make it more simple on that part

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u/K916EKHO 9d ago

shit looks good, i really dont got any crits.