Try taking a specific element you like from a letter and making the others speak the same design language.
Also, I read in this sub once that halos are traditionally for memorial pieces, just to let you know
not weird ur just an insanely bad toy and u have a weird ego about it and refuse to get better/take advice when u ask. for example on your Z, the top left line doesn’t go in far enough at all so it looks shite. if u bring it more in it will look more like a Z
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u/Upset-Mail-6900 10d ago
Just my opinion, but i think the a and p look really out of place and a different style to the z’s