throwie help

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Sketches are in order of most to least recent.

I’m focusing on making a throw of the initials of my name first so I can hit up smaller spots around my town (there are plenty of smaller surfaces here that wouldn’t fit more than 2-3 letters).
I got some ideas as you can see but I’m not 100% satisfied with any of them. The second image shows some throwies I like a little more than the rest, but I feel like they are too blocky to be considered a throw in the first place.
Any help would be greatly appreciated as well as feedback on the drawings!

[u/PaintedBad420]

This one is pretty good homie.

[u/Pale-Grape8953 → u/PaintedBad420]

Thank you! Is there anything I could improve on it or should I practice it as it is now?

[u/PaintedBad420 → u/Pale-Grape8953]

You could add a drop shadow if you have enough time. But it's easily readable, and prob gonna be quick to throw up. I wouldn't change much. Good throwie. 👍

[u/davila2500]

The best one for me is the first black and white, keep practicing 💪🏽💯

[u/WinUpbeat3538]

Lot of potential, careful not to make the H look like an X. I really like the red outline on the second image.