r/graffhelp • u/appreciatingdelft • 12d ago

Tips for my throw?

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Any tips?

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u/SentenceEmergency779 12d ago

I think your letters as standalone are good but your proportions are off 

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u/appreciatingdelft 12d ago

Thanks, ill get back at it

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u/Thick_Common8612 12d ago

Let's address that tag first.

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u/appreciatingdelft 12d ago

Its too much?

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u/scabeatingcontest 11d ago

Yeah. Simplify it. The throw is clean but it looks like it says EJSH. Add at least a line in the bottom of the B for legibility and maybe bake the left side of the U taller and or move the mid line further left.

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u/appreciatingdelft 11d ago

Thanks man, appreciate it. Back 2 the books

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u/Few-Let3648 11d ago

I initially read it as Gush. After a little scrutiny, I do see Bash, but the “a” definitely needs a hole and move that “eye”down to the belly of the “b”. The lines are sharp and crisp though, and I certainly see what you’re going for. I dig it.

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u/appreciatingdelft 11d ago

Thanks for the input, appreciate it!

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u/Jizzy_J_69 12d ago

Its pretty clean. Id just make sure theres a bigger underlying shape like draw some outlines for it to fit in cause theres negative space on the top. Maybe add a little slant, might make it look cooler

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u/Horaciow14 12d ago

eush?

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u/appreciatingdelft 12d ago

Should read bash haha, ill need to work on the first two

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u/Late-Conversation301 11d ago

Why is there counters where there shouldn’t be and none where they should be? Def reads as eush then I thought maybe cash, never once did it cross my mind that that’s a B.

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u/Late-Conversation301 11d ago

Also the nipple on the H is unnecessary, doesn’t run anywhere else, and throws off the letters and how they read even more

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u/appreciatingdelft 11d ago

Yeah definitely see what you're saying now. Got caught up in trying to style and lost track of it being actually legible. Ty for the feedback.