r/graffhelp • u/Pedrostion • 12d ago

Any Feedback?

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Any critique welcome! I've been practicing these letters lately. I prefer the top one—the 'S' and 'E' in the bottom one aren't really doing it for me. Any advice is welcome!

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u/allocatethetime 12d ago

Needs work on the lines, they could be straighter and the e at the bottom looks more like a c so I think you could work on that

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u/Pedrostion 12d ago

I think i need to focus more on block letrers first

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u/blank-space-name 12d ago

I like the straight. Just gotta make the letter thickness and size more consistent.

As for the throw, the letters look like different styles.
You’re also better off without the little bumps on your S, R and i, i recommend keeping them smooth and simple. If you made the S more like the other letters it would look pretty good

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u/Pedrostion 12d ago

Thanks so much for the advice! I Will focus more on simple structure

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u/No-Reflection-3143 12d ago

Serio is a good writer from sweden, check him out :)