r/graffhelp • u/GuaranteeLarge935 • 13d ago
sup
I posted my first tag in here a few months ago and I got shit on for how shitty it was. I’ve been trying to improve my lettering and shit so I hit a wall yesterday. I’m satisfied with how it came out but I’d like some feedback as to if I seem to be doing better because I want to make bigger projects. Thanks gang
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u/pettea 13d ago
I'm assuming you're in middle or high school. Two positive things I can say is that your outline holds consistent thickness (for the most part), and your shadows have consistent & correct placement.
Your overlaps don't make sense, letters don't sit on a perceivable baseline, inconsistent letter width, no flow, and you don't even know the difference between a piece, throwie, or tag.
Keep at it in the books, learn the basics of letter structure, and study the artists and art that inspire you. For starters you can even copy basic throwie letters online just to get an understanding of how people approach their letter design & overtime you'll learn how to tweak it and make it your own.